Post Critique Write Up

Two things were pointed out to me that had been done well. The sheep, obviously the bad one, has a squinty eye with red inner design. Two things that point to an ‘evil’ character. His sharp point also helped to define this. The coyote, with its blue color and inner design down like a frown denotes a sad character. The rounded figure creates a less threatening picture than the points of the sheep. Another thing was the realistic sand textures used; it offers a nice contrast against what otherwise is flat. One thing I had not noticed in the process of creating it, however, is the ring of colors. I was told it would make sense to line up the colors of the ring with the ring of animals. This would create a more unified border and make for a less distracting outer ring. Overall my comic was unique in its set up around a circular point.

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