The viz control is still on stepped mode make the eyes jump between poses. The expression on the face is distracting. The hips are not following the body and should instead lead the motion. There is not enough overlap and follow through on the spine. The weight is not believable; the legs are doing the lifting, not the hands. A suggestion to change this was put more of a bend in the knees and possibly hunching Norman over more so elbows support more weight. The ending rock is good for settling.
Overall this project was challenging. Not enough attention was paid to all the body parts’ overlap and followthrough.