Student Critique: Callie McIntosh


Callie McIntosh Link


  • Nice expression when turning, adds personality
  • Tilt of the head at the end adds to the effect of the expression


  • During most of the steps, the leg goes out straight
  • Hands stay in same position through the animation
  • Could hold poses more where the head turns: see the expression for longer
  • Jittery movements
  • Turn is awkward: everything turns at once instead of following a certain body part


  • Aside from the straight legs, the steps are good: see some movement in the feet when stepping
This entry was posted in Writing and tagged , , . Bookmark the permalink.

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Logo

You are commenting using your account. Log Out /  Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )


Connecting to %s