Student Critique: Joseph DiCaro


Joseph DiCaro Post


  • Smooth animation
  • The bounce of the legs when drinking adds nice exaggeration of difficulty


  • Lifting the jug looks effortless – adding strained look to face may help
  • The right hand moves around when holding the jug
  • The hands look stiff next to all the other fluid movement
  • Jug doesn’t go over mouth when drinking


  • Anticipation before lifting the jug – can see him getting ready to lift it
  • Variation in speeds of the animation
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